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From TUesday, June 28...read reviewed copy for comments.

Once you read the comments and make corrections to your paper on tone, MW, read this document but DO NOT READ until you make those revisions first. You may be tempted to unhealthily skip steps. :) I will look for this lesson no. 5 Thursday evening along with L4 revisions on tone.

Assignment below is for Wednesday evening: see note in previous L4 attachment above. Remember- do not read before finishing your revision. I want to give you another manner of concluding a paper when dealing with literature. MW- no advice, no selling on the last sentence of the paper. :) Have a good eveving and I'll try to touch base tomorrow evening.



Good evening, MW. I have attached your final work. I am so proud of all your work these past two weeks and look forward to reading this last piece. You are fabulous!



Ms.W, I'm not sure why the mood assignment did not appear....I had posted it but it did not stay posted. I'm so sorry. I have added the new conclusion that I had completed to my corrected tone essay. I'm so sorry it did not show up.



I absolutely loved the ending! So sweet! Thanks for everything you have done! Great! I was looking for this. I will review and send you a narrative about our work. Ah- the ending is fabulous! Well worth the wait!!! Hey, MW- it's July 4th! Happy Indepndence! I will send you an email about final comments on your work, but attached here are the comments on these last two works.