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Thursday 11:00, 7.21- CHK: attached is your spooky house with comments and the new assignment due by tomorrow evening.

Sunday eveving, 7.11- checking in. I will check again in the morning so that we can look at this assignment's corrections and move on to the research paper.

Tuesday, 7.26- CHK, you still are not saying much with your words. Okay, you're scared. That's a sample phrase you might add. You are "telling" me you are scared but instead "show" me you are scared. I should feel the emotion of the sentence without you actually saying "I'm scared." This is something you need to continue working on with all of your written work.

We need to move on even though we could spend another week on these sentences. Let's get started with the research paper. Read the attachment and be ready to turn in your annotated bibliography and your thesis statement by Thursday evening, not Tuesday as the attachment says. Communicate with me if you have questions.



Hello, CHK! Look at your annotations review then move on to writing the draft. The information you need is in the following attachment.



CHK- go back and make changes on which I commented. Your biggest problem is organization of thought. Make sure every paragraph has a topic sentence and all the sentences within SUPPORT this topic sentence; otherwise, you need to omit then and use those ideas elsewhere. Let me know if you have any questions. I'll look for your paper tomorrow (Sunday) night around 9:00. Work hard on organization.



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